Added: May 20, 2008
From: 1Aware1
Duration: 1:3
It felt like warmth and sandpaper, Gliding lightly across pale skin.His fingertips tracing her spine Her shoulder blades, then her chin.Her eyes sparkled like desertsAt the dawning of moonlightThe cold steal pole brushing Against the nerves in her thighs With a torment no being surly Could ever provide...And she looks so alive, Swinging swiftly by way Of the grip of her heals Keeping the beat between deep breaths And the way she imagined it'd feel.Beneath wires and ribbonsStockings made out of sheerSearching for intensity greater than tumblingAnd other than fear...
Channel: People
Tags: expressions ideas poetry spoken word
Rating: 5.00 (2 ratings) Views: 70' favoriteCount='1 Comments: 7
DavidRandallCurtis Says:
May 20, 2008 - 5 stars/fav
newcompreplys Says:
May 20, 2008 - really nice.
1Aware1 Says:
May 20, 2008 - thanks, and to respond to the comment you left on the other one which i deleted and therefore cant respond on, it is purple black, but yes quite black none the less. lol
kjshady03 Says:
May 20, 2008 - I liked this one, I was just thinking of a poem like this yesterday. Funny how that works!Do your thing girl, 'cause all of us youtube poets bring something different to the table.
tjkoz22 Says:
May 21, 2008 - I'm fascinated by the evolution of your reading style.5*Tom
sadmidget8000 Says:
May 23, 2008 - hell yeh. why pale sking though?
MindForge83 Says:
May 24, 2008 - Like velvet honey to my ears...[Searching for intensity greater than tumblingAnd other than fear...]You're making me look bad, leaving me speechless exponentially after each upload! Loved the color composition for your vid; it intuitively fulfilled the right aesthetic for this mood.
1Aware1 Says:
May 27, 2008 - because the person i was writing about is vary vary pale, she is like porclin. yet beautiful, and that alone is very odd.
1Aware1 Says:
May 27, 2008 - thank you, I was thinking this particular peice would be not one most people could apprecheate, and wow, i really can not spell, and after all this practise too. anyhow I do not posses nor could ever posses the ability to make someone as free spirited as yourself look bad, and anyone who disagrees is simply incapable of seeing what they are stareing at.
MikeWysong Says:
May 20, 2008 - I want to go back and watch them all over now.Kool.